Tuesday, December 4, 2007

Haiku to Tyler, Jill and Family


Haiku to Tyler and Jill Carson family who just survived a wicked car crash.

Suburban sideways:
Tyler, Jill and Family,
on Utah highways.

How did it happen?
Pushed from behind by a car
sliding on byways.

Horifying crash:
exploding like a bomb
Everyone buckled?

You one lucky son.
Some divine intervention
you better believe.

All ok? Thankfully so.
Is anyone hurt?
Amazingly, no!

Grateful, you're ok.
What would we do without you?
Life would be so gay. (bad gay, not good gay)


3 comments:

jt said...

pretty fancy you
you are getting good at these
haiku are not you?

Heather said...

I'll have to agree
if it were not for your wit
I would be asleep

Beeswax said...

No puedo Haiku
Bad Gay, good gay is funny
Keep up the poetry, you.

Goodness, syllable and rhyming limitations are stressful. I'll stick to prose for now.